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Given 2013-12-20
CCLXVII by *wrheath Suggester Writes: An absolutely masterful haiku with a perfect balance of thoughtfulness instilled in the ambiguity of its metaphor. ( Suggested by Nichrysalis and Featured by BeccaJS )
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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wrheath Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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ShaozChampion Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
small...simple...powerful

Congrats on your DD ^^ it's really a beautiful haiku
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Contrared Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You make winter seem 'friendly' when it's eh ....
And that is the secret of a true writer! ;)
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fatowlbert Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
Toilet paper -
a soft nuzzle
as it passes
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AgCNO Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
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Contrared Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are the master of all masters! :iconbravoplz:
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bloxxman978 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
Oh god i'm diying
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Nichrysalis Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad this was featured. I stand by what I said; I love the double meaning in use here: who is she? A winter storm front or a mysterious woman who is hard to figure out? There is so much to infer from the small amount of words here, and that is the beauty of this piece.
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wrheath Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you kindly.
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Lucain24 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Incredible
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robson666 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist
congratulations to the well deserved Daily Deviation Clap Clap
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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poetries Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
This is a great haiku! Congratulations on the DD! :heart:
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